My favorite place
My favorite place
This is a picture of Sanam Chan Park. It's located in the
Sanam Chandra Place, Nakorn Pathom. Sanam Chan Place is behind the park and it
was surrounded by trees. There were flowers bloomingcolorfully in the
garden. I touch fresh atmosphere in the
morning. I saw the injured woman under the tree walking a brown dog. The broken
window by a growing boy was playing football on the way and then I saw a
colorful tiny bird’s signing on the sunflower. When I'm sitting on the chair
but I saw the phone dropped under the chair when I heard the phone ring but by
the time I reached it, the person at the end had hung up. When the wind blow
the bullet wood next to the chair has blossomed in the garden. I smelled
something burning in front of the Sanam Chan Park, Suddenly I heard the alarm
of fire engine so I was quickly on the scene. But I arrived there I found that
a fireman buying a grilled pork with sticky rice.
This information about my favorite place is Sanam Chan Park.
Why I like there because I want to test natural air in the morning.
It is good descriptive about surrounding. But something is wrong. I will give you 8/10
ตอบลบThis picture is interesting. I will give you 8.5 points.
ตอบลบThe way you describe me makes me feel like I'm in the picture. Content and images are consistent.
ตอบลบI give you 9 points.
I've been here and you can broadcast this place well. Your paragraph is well-organized. But you have some mistakes. I like your story I give you 8.5 / 10
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