Story of felling
Story of felling
- Who was/were involved in the story?
Myself, my friends and children.
- What happened?
I went to make activities of the volunteer camps.
- When did the story happen?
Three months ago, around 6 hours.
- Where did the story happen?
Pilok, Thong Phaphum, Kanchanaburi.
- How did it happen?
- I took a long trip, there were 399 curves.
- I was excited.
- I was sightseeing around and took a photos.
- I felt about in cold weather.
- I went to a volunteer camps.
Why did I go to volunteer camps?
- I brought a donation of clothes.
- I brought a instructional media for teaching.
- I went to recreational activities.
Why did I go to recreational activities?
- I thought it was joy sharing and good relationship.
- It was important for this camps.
- How did the story end?
Happy Memories
Three months ago, my friends and I went to make activities of the volunteer camps at Pilok, Thong Phaphum, Kanchanaburi. I took a long trip around 6 hours because I took by bus and there were 399 curves, I was excited. On the way, I was sightseeing and took a photos with my friends. The viewpoints and scenery were fascinating to me. After that, when I arrived the weather was very cold and the cold wind was wiling around me. Although, it was a daytime. After that, I brought the clothes and instructional media for teaching to the children of Pilok School. Next day, I mad the recreation activities it was the goal of this camp. Because I thought it was a joy sharing and good relationship. The last day before I came back, I had exchanged the opinion with my friends that I was sacrificed for others. Because the was the result of giving over receiving.


Ot is interesting story. But it does not have conclusion of story so I will give you 8.5/10
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